Thursday, July 4, 2013

Challenge Post [4] -- book spine poetry

 

This challenge is hosted by Oh Chry's.

Rise
Breathe
Linger
Wither

 

The truth about forever
Just beyond the clouds
The sky is everywhere
A walk to remember
The lion's roar
The lion's throne



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11 comments:

  1. Great poems! I really like the single word titles. They flow together really well. Thanks for sharing!

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  2. I love the first one! So simple, yet so beautiful. And the second one is lovely too!

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  3. Nice! I like both of them, but just like Stellar here, I'm fond of the first one. It is so short, but really beautiful :D How is your reading going?

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  4. Oooh, they're both really good! Lucky you, you have a lot of books.

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  5. Great poems! I like how you did the backgrounds in the pictures.

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  6. Wow. Real poetry is working here. I heart the first one so much. :D

    Thoughts & Pens

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  7. I really like the first one. Very good!

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  8. These are both fantastic! I love how you used all single word titles in the first poem! :)

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  9. The first one is my favorite! Sounds like a 4 word representation of life.

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  10. I like your poems. good job! :D

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  11. Oh great work. The first one is my favorite. It seems so simple with the one-word titles, but the combination of them together really tells a story full of emotion! :)

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